Week 5 Storytelling: Bharata Returns

The night was dark and the moon was bright as ever. Bharata was asleep at his grandfather's house peacefully until...

"Ahh!" Bharata screamed and woke up from his dream panting and sweating.
"What's wrong, my grandson?" said Bharata's grandfather Ashwapati.
"Oh grandfather, I had a terrible dream that someone died and I can't see who it was," said Bharata.

Ashwapati tried to comfort Bharata by telling him it was just a dream and that everything would be okay. However, Bharata could not sleep. His face was pale and damp with sweat. The nightmare was horrible. How could he go back to sleep? Suddenly, Shatrughna opened the door and his eyes looked beyond frightened.

"My dear brother! Someone has died but I do not know who! We must head back to Ayodhya now," said Shatrughna.

Obediently, Bharata packed all his belongings and so did Shatrughna and as they bid their grandfather goodbye, they were in a hurry to find out what had happened in Ayodhya. As they saw the city approaching, the brothers stepped off their horses and looked at the grand palace. Kaikeyi was sitting by the window and ran to her sons.

"Bharata! Dasaratha is dead and Rama is in exile," said Kaikeyi. She explained everything to her son and how she used her two wishes to make Bharata king. Rama had been banished for no crime he had done. Bharata was outraged by his mother's actions. "How could she be so manipulative?" he thought. "She wanted me to be king that bad she was willing to get rid of Rama and cause the king's death?!" he thought once more. "Okay, maybe she did not cause the king's death on purpose but Rama's exile and my father dead?! Her wishes have caused this to happen!" Bharata thought to himself. He knew that Rama was not her son and all she wanted were good things for Bharata, but how could she send Rama in exile? He had done nothing to her.

Bharata had always thought of his mother as a kind and gentle woman. He had praised her and admired her caring ways but this situation was different. Bharata had changed the way he looked at her. "This was exactly like my dream. My mother had used her two wishes and sent Rama into exile! I heard my father scream!" Bharata recalled from his nightmare.

However, Kaikeyi was still his mother and deep down Bharata really cared about her. His mother had always been there for him since he was a young boy. His father Dasaratha had too many wives and occupied his time with women and his throne. Bharata and Dasaratha did not have a connection like how he was with his mother.



Bharata watched his mother as she explained all the horrible deeds just so she could make him king. Bharata thought, "I cannot believe how evil she is! But did she do this all for me? All she wanted was for me to become king and have good fortune, but why did she have to do it in such an evil way?" he said. His mother was a kind woman and very caring to Shatrughna and Bharata. So what had gotten into her? He could never look at his mother the same way again. She had done him wrong and was not apologetic. She did not even acknowledge her responsibility for the king's death or regret what she had done. Maybe his father had done something wrong in the past and it resulted in karma. This was his father's punishment. Kaikeyi will soon get her karma too. She was selfish and wanted Bharata to become king instead of Rama. His mother would get her punishment. Now Vasishtha, the God of Brahma wanted Bharata to be king until Rama returned... He agreed but only for the sake of Rama and not his mother's wish. Bharata's dream came true... his father was dead and Rama's exile had caused everyone grief and chaos. He was disappointed in his mother's actions but it was too late to change back time. Now Bharata had to step up to the plate and become king until Rama comes back.

Rama and Bharata: (WikiSource) Bharata

Author's Note:
I decided to make a story about Bharata's return from his grandfather's house. I wanted to make the story in his own perspective by showing how outraged he was by his mother's actions. He could not believe his mother would be the reason for his father's death even though she would not admit to it. She basically tore the family apart and sent his stepbrother Rama to exile. Her selfish motives were to make her own son king. All she wanted was happiness for Bharata but she did not think of the results. Kaikeyi even explained her motives to Bharata but he could not accept the truth. I wanted to emphasize how in disbelief Bharata was because he always thought of his mother as a kind woman. He did not know she was so manipulative and sneaky just to make everything right for her. Most importantly, I added the fact that Bharata did not really want to be king and that the people of Ayodhya knew the crown was rightfully Rama's. However, due to Rama being in exile, Bharata had to step up and be king until his brother returned. I added the detail of how Bharata agreed to become king not because he wanted to but because Vasishtha, the priest told him to. Bharata had to think for the good of his people. I also wanted to emphasize the disappointment he had for his mother. He is uncertain of forgiving her even though Kaikeyi is his mother. Bharata respected Rama and so I focused on how Bharata agreed to become king until Rama returned towards the end of the story.

Bibliography: William Buck's Ramayana 1976

Week 5 Reading Diary B: Continuation of Buck's Ramayana

p. 162-218

This is probably the most exciting part of the book and such a cliff hanger after reading the last section of Hanuman. The chapter began with Maricha disguising as a deer to help Ravana capture Sita. I felt like Maricha was being manipulated by Ravana because his intentions were to leave Rama and Sita alone but Ravana would not listen. So then Ravana ends up capturing Sita by disguising as an old man. I thought it was really intriguing when Buck described the reason why Ravana didn't rape Sita. He was known to be a rapist and Buck added significant details of the reason why Ravana couldn't rape women anymore, it was because he was cursed and if he were to rape, one of his heads will fall off. So Ravana had to kidnap her instead.

Another interesting part of the book is the introduction of Hanuman and his birth. Hanuman was the son of Anjana but she abandoned her baby. I thought it was so adorable that Hanuman saw the sun thinking it was a mango and wanted to eat it. Does he only eats mangoes?

The death of Vali was a dramatic scene, when Rama stroke his arrow at Vali, his poor wife Tara couldn't bear watching her husband die and killed herself. I felt like in the book Ramayana, a lot of these women really love their husbands. Kausayla and now Tara, watching their husband die was really dramatic and painful for them. I feel bad for these women and especially Sita which I said several times throughout my reading diaries.

So then the story goes on finding Sita and trying to rescue her. Rama gives Hanuman a ring as a token to give to Sita when he finds her. I thought that part was really significant because the ring symbolizes the bond between Rama and Sita. The ring will let Sita know that Rama is safe and here to find her.

Rama gives Hanuman the ring: Hanuman accepts ring

Week 5 Reading Diary A : Continuation of Buck's Ramayana

p. 110- 161

The chapter starts off with Bharata returns and found out what his mother Kaikeyi had done in order for him to be the successor. Kausayla found out that King Dasaratha is dead and the news began to spread. Rama refuses to go back to Ayodha until his exile is over and Bharata agreed to rule until Rama's exile is done.

The story goes on with Rama's journey and how Shurpanakha (Ravana's sister) wants to marry Rama but he rejected her. I find it pretty disturbing that Laskashama had to mutilate her because she tried to attack Sita. I guess karma happens to those who are jealous. So after her being mutilated, she runs off and tell Lanka who then grabbed the demon army to attack Rama and Laskashama, which they ended up defeating. It's kind of strange that Shurpanakha told Ravana that Sita was the most beautiful woman and that is what urged Ravana to abduct her. I am not a big fan of Shurpanakha in this part of the book. She is kind of a snitch for telling Ravana what happened and is full of jealousy because she couldn't get Rama's attention. I could see why Ravana and Shurpanakha are siblings, they both want something they can't have and use force to obtain it. Poor Sita, she has done nothing so far in the story and gets attacked and abducted by people.

Shurpanakha trying to attack Sita: Shurpanakha

Week 4 Storytelling: The Death of Dasaratha

As I lay next to my beautiful wife Kausayla, I closed my eyes and slept for a short period of time. Then I woke up and remembered....

Kausayla gripped my hands, "My dear Kausayla, are you awake?"

In my sleep, I could barely hear my sweet Kausayla's words. Far in the distance, I hear a voice of a young boy. The boy cried out for me. He looked at me, "Why did you dagger me with your arrow?!" I couldn't bare to look at his face. I woke up and saw my Kaysayla holding my hands with tears in her eyes.

In my last mission, I helped Kaikeyi to convince the people that Bharata should be king. I originally wanted Rama to be the successor, oh Rama so brave and wise, he would surely fit to be the king, but what has gotten into me? Kaikeyi and Manthara had manipulated me to make Bharata the successor and force to exile Rama!Manthara was telling me the horrible stories of Rama and if he was king he would not only bring my people down but my family. Of course, I am worried. I am worried for my people and family; therefore, I had to do what was best and exile Rama, but as I look back I regretted everything. I should have never listen to Kaikeyi and Manthara and trusted my instincts in choosing Rama. I should have never taught Kaikeyi the language of animals. Why did I do it?! I knew it would cost me my life and now my wife is suffering. I am dying and I know it.

This dream that I had of the boy that I killed when I was a young man. I must tell Kausayla right now  and let her know my last words. I looked into Kausayla's eyes filled with tears and told her the flashback of the boy. As I was telling the story, she couldn't stop crying but I had to tell her. I love Kausaya so much.

I looked into her eyes and try to memorize the beautiful face. I could hear my heart beating slower and slower and then I spoke to my wife one last time....

"Queen, that whole crime now comes home to me. If Rama could touch me to live, but I have no other help. I cannot hear my own voice. My hand grows numb. I can hardly feel your hand, I barely speak. My death fast approaches. I have wronged my son, but he has done well toward me...Rama....Where are you?.... Rama..."

Dasaratha's sin of the boy he killed (Source): Dasaratha

Author's Note:This part in the book basically described Dasaratha's thoughts and his regrets when he was dreaming of the boy he killed. I pretty much just stuck with the original story but added more details of wrote some thoughts and feelings he had towards his wife.  I wanted to emphasize the regrets and sorrow for not making Rama the successor and how he regretted being manipulated by Kaikeya. I wanted the story to focus on Dasaratha's feelings and how much he loves his wife. Moreover, I made the ending scene more dramatic to emphasize sorrow and sadness and the pain Kausayla is going through when watching her husband die. I wrote the story in Dasaratha's perspective when he was about to die. I focused on his last thoughts and words to Kausayla and added some emotion to it with Kausayla crying. There is a little bit of anger towards Kaikeyi and Manthara in the context and regrets of not appointing Rama as his successor. The last paragraph are the actual words in the book of his last thoughts. I stuck with the original dying scene and just turned it in Dasaratha's perspective but in those few seconds before he told Kausayla his story. I also described his feelings toward Kausayla as he was telling her his story. 

Bibliography: William Buck, Ramayana 1976

Week 4 Reading Diary B: Buck's Ramayana

(pgs. 60-109)

This part of the book focused more on Rama than in the beginning. Buck really emphasized on Rama's bravery throughout the journey. Kaikeyi seems to be really annoying and kind of manipulative? She tried to convince that there would be disaster if Rama becomes king and but I guess it wasn't her fault since she was the servant of Manthara and her mind was being controlled. She was the reason for Rama's exile and Rama did oppose of it, even though he was nice enough to convince his father not to be angry with Kaikeyi. The actions of Kaikeyi does not bother me as much just because I'm not really a fan of Rama, even though the books are based on his journey and he is the protagonist and known to be the brave god. I don't like the way Rama treats Sita. I don't think their love is fair and he still doubts Sita's love when she has done nothing but loyal to him. Even though he saves her, he still questions her purity. I have talked about this numerous times in my past posts how I feel about their relationship.

The people in the city of Ayodha seemed really supportive of Rama during his exile, the animals were helpful and were a big part of Rama's journey. The death of Dasharatha was pretty sad and he probably feels bad for killing the boy. The ending part of was miserable and how he relates to the death of the boy to his son, although he could have died because he taught Kaikeyi the language of animals when he was not suppose to, so maybe karma on him? It was still sad that he died though, even though he was easily manipulated by Kaikeyi. This part of the story really emphasized the antagonist character of Kaikeyi. I actually enjoyed reading the bad behaviors of these characters.

(Brave Rama) Source: Rama

Week 4 Reading Diary A: Buck's Ramayana

(pgs 1-59)

I really enjoyed how the story starts out talking about Indra, the invisible demon warrior. So far, Buck's version of Ramayana is more descriptive and detailed than Narayan's book. Valmiki is such a great character for rescuing Sita. I don't understand why Sita unconditionally loves Rama when he doubted her over gossip, exiled her when she was carrying his sons, and also in the previous book, testing her in the fire for purity. Valmiki then becomes a poet and reveals the story of Rama to his two sons.

Moreover, I enjoyed reading about Ravana even though he is the antagonist in the story. He went through a lot of challenges and battles. I liked how the book described how destructive he was and really emphasized the evil in him. Another interesting part of the book was the marriage between Rama and Sita. Although I question Rama's love for Sita, it seemed as though Sita is so happy to be with Rama. It was quite intriguing how the three brothers of Rama all married the women in Janaka's household. It was like Rama and Sita were destined to be together or the brothers are meant to be with the Janaka's daughters. One thing that caught my attention was Buck's description of Sita's beauty. It was almost like she was a delicate woman and a presence of innocence in her.

Overall, Buck's version of Ramayana is pretty different than Narayan. He focused less on Rama's character and talked a lot about Ravana, which I liked better just because I'm not a big fan of Rama"s character. Buck also did a shorter version of Rama and Sita's love, he didn't add much details to their connection which was a bummer.

(Ravana the 10-headed demon) Source: Ravana

Sita's Story from Ramayana: Styles Brainstorm

Topic: My storybook will be about Sita's point of view and her love for Rama However, perhaps adding a twist to how she is also caught in between a love triangle with Rama and Ravana. In the story, Sita would have to choose between the two and decide which one of them is right for her. I will base my story off of our book in class Narayan: Ramayana and also The Notebook novel. It will be a mix of both. Basically the plot and storyline of Rama's journey will be the same but then I will add how Sita is conflicted of who she wants like in The Notebook. Overall, I will make this into a love story but focusing on Sita's point of view.

Bibliography: 
1. The Notebook (wikipedia): Based on the novel by Nicholas Sparks (1996), where Noah and Allie falls in love over the summer but her parents rejected them. She met someone else and have to choose.
2. Narayan Ramayana: The book in our class, the plot and characters will remain the same and will continue with Rama's journey in finding Sita from her abduction, but realized it wasn't a kidnap because Sita was willing to go with Ravana. R.K Narayan (2006).

Possible Styles:


Sita as the Storyteller: Sita was never recognized in Ramayana and so I decided to make her the main character and a love story revolving around her. She was in grief and treated by force with Rama and Ravana that I decided she should be the one to make her own decisions in the story. Sita would be the narrator and it will be coming from her perspective and how she feels between the two men.

Journey: I still like the part of Rama and Hanuman continue on their journey to find Sita; however, I might twist it up a bit and instead of Ravana kidnapping her, it would be her willing to go with Ravana. In the story, Rama would try to find her and win his love back after he realized she was the one for him. There would be animals in the story but they wouldn't be a big part in the story. I decided to focus the story on the three of them. (Rama, Sita, Ravana).

Rama and Sita's love at first sight: In the beginning of the story I want to focus on how Rama and Sita met and how they fell in love with each other, similar to The Notebook. It will be a summer's love and the two will find out how much they love for each other but eventually the parents forbid them and force Sita to move. Sita will then meet Ravana who is approved by her parents and decide who she wants from there. Sita comes from a wealthy family and her parents have a summer home where Rama lives and that is when they will meet.

Flashbacks: Another style I had in mind is Sita telling the story using flashbacks of her and Rama's memories. In way it is kind of like the movie Titanic where Rose talks about Jack. However, the whole story wouldn't be based on just flashbacks. I want to add Sita's memories of Rama while she was with Ravana and then realize in the end that Rama is the one for her. She will be thinking a lot about Rama and come to her senses. Instead of pleasing her parents to marry Ravana. In Indian culture, arrange marriages are pretty popular so I could possibly add how Sita's parents want her to marry Ravana, but in the end she went with her gut and chose Rama.

Rama and Sita's Love

Rama and Sita